Deserted Wholeness

First time to meet the sea in that mood
Hardly can tell the sky, the sea from the land
All has merged into an amazing white interconnection
Cold dusty waves, scattered footprints pass by the warm beauty of the wholeness
… deserted wholeness
A few passengers fit & interconnect as they show up
Speechless speaks out every bitwhite interconnection of the wholeness
revealing the unrevealed to the revealers
in a symphony & a collective dance
each genuine step enlightens a little Universe
each step transforms a Universe
each step dissolves a blockage
each dissolved blockage flowers into a rebirth….
of a new genuine step….


Please do! Just be sure to include this complete blurb with it:

I’m Neveen El-Gamal, an Egyptian 39 years old single mom. I’m a Reiki and an Emotrance practitioner which I find difficult working out in Egypt.

I have a published poetry book. I’m also leading a series of spiritual awareness intuitive workshop with an Australian friend of mine who’s lived in Egypt for about ten years.

I am very grateful to have met the lovely women in the sisterhood group and participate in The Daily Sisterhood.


3 thoughts on “Deserted Wholeness

  1. I’m just curious, Neveen, because I’m not a poet. Did the photo inspire the words or did you find the photo after you wrote the words? It fit perfectly, and really helped me to understand the words. Thank you 🙂 ❤

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